As I am reading my peers' comments on my observation notes:
- I noticed that I did not pay enough attention on the smell of the bookstore, as both of my peers pointed out. Instead I put too much energy and attention on inferring the inside world of them.
- Since it was comparably silent in the bookstore, I just took down several conversations of this space.
- Even I have thought about whether there is a way to make students feel better when purchasing the textbooks, I still did not figure it out. I think that is probably because the textbooks are so expensive and myself is one of the "victims".
- My peers point out that I did not make enought ethos observations, but I do not agree on this point since I have already pointed it out in the inference part of my Aug 27's note.
- From their comments, I can see that they were satisfied with my analysis in the 3 rhetorical appeals. Thanks to them.
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